1) Inside fridge, fridge opens, slobby man (tom) looks in and grabs milk. /
2) Follow side shot of bringing milk to mouth. Milk spills down Toms chin. /
3) Extreme closeup of Toms beard, he wipes milk away. /
4) Close up of bacon cooking, angled. /
5) Over the shoulder shot of Tom reading bacon. (flips packet over to read other side.) He looks up (we can see the side of his head)/
6) Outside a lady is gardening on other side of fence she looks up over fence. /
7)Front on medium shot (ideally through window) Of tom smiling and waving. /
8) Close up of face and top of fence. Lady stares back confused and waves hesitantly. /
9) Side on medium shot of Tom smiling then going back to cook. /
0) Front on medium shot of lady confused and going back to garden. /
0) Front on medium shot of lady confused and going back to garden. /
11) Close up of bacon sliding on to plate. /
12) Front on medium shot of Tom eating bacon and eggs, he stares forward. /
13) Close up of family photo. /
14) Front on medium shot of Tom looking down sadly. Then grabbing something from pocket./
15) Close up of photo of tom and equally slobby friends. /
16) Front on medium shot of him looking sad at photo. /
17) Front on medium shot of Tom suddenly turning to look out window. /
18) Medium shot tom running to window to see of family pulling up in car. /
9) Medium shot front on of Tom shocked. /
9) Medium shot front on of Tom shocked. /
20) Close up of key entering from other side. /
21) Dolly zoom of shocked Tom. Close up head and shoulders.
22) Close up of key entering from other side. (Montage starts) /
23) Front on medium shot of Tom turning back to eggs. /
24) close up of photo in pocket. /
25) Close up of beard, stuffing food in mouth. /
26) Medium shot of Tenant walking inside. /
27) Close up of plate. /
28) Low floor shot of suitcase hitting ground. /
29) Close up of dishwasher opening. /
30) Close up of dish going in. /
31) Quick pan up to tenants face looking around. /
32) Close up of back pack, Tom grabs it. /
33) Close up of handle of back door. Tom opens door runs out. /
34) Close up of tenants face, they sniff air confused. /
35) Long shot of Tom walking out gate and down street out of shot. /
36) Long shot of Tom crossing road looking around. /
37)Extreme long shot of grove. Tom walks into the middle of shot, he looks around at all the buildings. /
38) Medium shot of Tom turning camera, and looking forward. /
39) Establishing shot of gross paint chipped house. /
40) Medium shot of Tom looking through window taken from inside. /
41) Medium shot of Tom climbing through window taken from outside. /
42) Long establishing shot of Tom standing in room looking around. The room is a mess. /
43) Long shot down hallway of Tom walking towards and peeking in every room. /
44) Long shot of Tom walking into really gross kitchen. /
pulls out photo and takes off glasses
overs holder shot of the photo then he lowers the photo revealing the family eat dinner in the same position as his friends in the photo
shot through slates of family devouring them meal like animals
then little girl leaps onto table to grab last sausage but misses and rolls over in a hissy fit.
everyone leaves the table to reveal the girl lying on the table
the hobo, seeing it all blurry, thinks the girl on the table is the remains of the families dinner and drops his glasses in fright thinking he's trapped in a house of cannibals
shot of him freaking out and looking around the closet
shot of broom
shot of duct tape
quick cuts of him making his drawing pin spare
side shot of outside the closet- of the spare slowy pocking through the door followed by him
tracking shot of hobo going over to the hobo going over to the table to examine the girl
then the girl looks at him making him scream and then spins around and gets a second fright
shot of the mums rocking in her chair knitting then
hobos blurry vision of the mum
then same angle but of the mum cackling and stitching pieces of skin together
Low shot from beside the mum of the hobo thrusting spare towards the mum and backing off then runs out of the room
cool gopro face shot of him running down hall way and trying all the door but they are lock
then tracking shot over sholder of him running. Dad steps out in front of him
then high shot of him falling down
then blurry hobo vision
then same angle of father looking like a maniac with blood prints on his face
hobo scrambles to his feet
gopro face shot of him running in the other direction towards the back door.
Cut to little girl running around back yard
then back the hobo open door
cut to girl running through sheet on washing line and gets in over her head
shot of the hobo running into the back yard and seeing the girl then screaming again
blurry hobo vision
then same angle of little ghost
face shot of hobo looking over his sholder and running away
shot of family altogether looking scary
point of veiw shot of him running into clothes line pole
tracking over shoulder shot of father walking over to the guy and seeing the photo has fallen out of his pocket
low shot of dad crouching down and looking at the photo then gives a sympathetic
close up of the photo
cut to wide shot of dad sitting on couch smiling at photo and the rests of the family tearing the hobo to piece in the background
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